I only got through the first few pages and i already saw a great difference in translations! Yours are way easier to understand and really straightforward! Keep up the good work!
@Insanityprism also, when I said she's putting everyone at risk i meant it. Just as the knight said, if something were to happen to the duke, it puts the country at risk. If mc was to die that just means there's one less person to protect the country. On the off chance that something happens to...
@Insanityprism i still think she deserves it. Like i said, it wasn't just her life she was putting at risk, it was everyone's. She was going to die anyway, including her family. Do you really think they would've let them live as potential witnesses? And yes, she would have trusted the duke...
@ryouhira not necessarily. If he took out his revenge on the father, he would be good but this is taking it to the extreme. Yes, he's still getting revenge on the father but he's hurting an innocent girl in the process. He is destroying this girl's life because of her father. It reminds me of...
Im sorry but i feel nothing for hannah. If anything, she deserved it. Yeah she's fifteen and rash but that little stunt could've and did cost them both their lives.