Immortal ✓, slave ✓, op mc ✓, shit artsyle ✓, if this manga keeps ticking off the cliche fantasy (isekai mostly) trope, I don't think this manga is good, I just hope that it's doesn't go to a harem tag, and at least I think this manga is going to focus on the girl more, so that's a bit different
Wait I just realized, but isn't this manga's chapter have a really low page number for a monthly manga, I mean this chapter had 16 pages, that's really low
While I do appreciate the translation, but it's so hard to read, like most of the sentences doesn't make sense, and they're not even redrawing it, they just blur it
@Jupitus look dude, I'm just giving criticism, it's not like I have to enjoy every single thing, there's always going to be something that a story could've done better, even my favorite manga have it's very own criticism. And don't take a criticism as hate, because I actually give my opinion on...
Ngl if the title is just "My New Devil Wife" instead, it'll be a much better title.
@Striffee oh by "train him" you meant fighting, totally wasn't thinking something else