Interesting at first but it doesn’t hold true to its premise which makes it weird and inconsistent. This guy was shown at the begging to be in a shipwreck-mood about his life and a chapter later he’s walking around as if he only looks bored af. The fmc is sometimes mad at him, sometimes not...
@Flamedance20 That’s true, It’s normal for people to want to think that their favorite mangas don’t have flaws, there will allways be something wrong tho. But a formal critique deserves a formal reply.
@Flamedance20 I don’t know how many other adventure stories you’ve read but this is really different from other stories of this kind. The drama is more developed on the message side of the manga than emotions that are created trough something like conflicts, something you’d see much more in...
Niche little story, smaller things here and there are a bit weird but it’s no problem. Ending could be a little better but the premise about her love is plenty good.