Thank you for the scans, it was a great read.
btw Naver webtoon have this fan-translation thing. Can't you try contacting them and start working with them officially? I'm sure they'll be glad to share the raws
Agreed with that last dialogue changed to "You're being a creep" and you might wanna change the font to a more comical one like animeace etc.
Also sfx doesn't really need to be translated but some words outside of the speech bubble need to be translated for the sake of coherency.