> Franchesca
I don't believe I've seen any Italian ever render the name this way. Pretty sure it's Francesca. The "che" sound comes from Italian pronunciation rules ("ce" is pronounced "che"), so romanizing the name verbatim is incorrect.
Apart from that, the TL is awkward in places. Biggest...
@Lorexen Trust me, there's so much worse out there than what you present here -- I'm sure you've seen plenty such examples on MD. Won't name names, but there's some real big, unrepentant offenders worthy of "lol fire TL/PR" or "pls stahp." Can't say you're one.
Just mind you don't fall into the...
Yasudaaaaaaaaaa
Love the art from this guy (Jiken Jaken, Kusanagi-san), nice to see a new series... also, pits
Prepare... to receive
The plural form of "advice" in English is "advice"
Overall, I think your TL/PR style's a step up from most scan groups*
* ...but a few lines, like Sasaki-kun on...
> not sure if axed
there were a lot of setups without resolutions... it's too abrupt to leave out axe-kun as a possibility, imo
there was also an awful lot of focus on foreign exchange girl, which kinda gives this vibe of planned extended arcs with each girl that'll never come to fruition
on top...
(did the PR fall asleep halfway through the chapter? some of the dialogue is just... weird)
imagine if akari's friend actually did mean "matching outfits"
@IceCubed
For me it's not a matter of knowing what something translates to, but more knowing the target language. You can tell immediately when someone's new to TL, or when they don't have a full grasp of English nuance, idioms, and manner of speech (the latter which I frequently find to be the...
engrishy
lots of awkward sentences, e.g. p.2 panel 2 ("She got a fiance...")
silly spelling mistakes e.g. p.5 panel 1 (hsa -> has)
And p.2 panel 3: "...Hack!" (???)
appreciate the dedication to the contemporary classics, but pleeeeeease put more effort into proofing/qc ;_;