@HinokaguraNarukami: Thanks, but you have some typos.
page 3: "what club did you went to high school" should be "what club do you go to in high school".
page 5: "I'm really glad that I get to meet you" (It be should be "got" instead.)
... Okay, can people please stop @ ing me? My inbox is getting flooded! XD (Now to see WTF got you guys so... appreciative.)
EDIT: Yeesh, @xxsaznpride, you didn't have to credit me like this. Now I feel hugely embarrassed from all this attention!
That said, an important correction: I didn't...
@Glomoro: People can say or do things in the heat of the moment that they'd never normally say/do. Even Mashizu herself notes that noticing Kotoka snapped her out back to thinking rationally.
@darekpawlo: Chiharu connected a lot of dots and now suspects that Zeke is Lorem's husband/Gospel's father.
@Stoner: You're assuming that the last page was serious rather than a joke.
@cor3zone: What's got you so pissed off?
Huh. So it's basically Komi-san wa Komyushou desu, but with abrasive delinquent personality instead of social anxiety as the cause of friendlessness, death from loneliness as an actual psychosomatic disease, and presumably far less emphasis on character stereotypes. I dig it.
@xxsaznpride: ... Somehow I completely missed the "SHUT UP!!" on page 2, despite it being very visible now that I'm looking again. I guess I was distracted by the awe from that massive mouth-blast consuming half the page to notice. Now, however, I'm left wondering what she meant by "That felt...
@xxsaznpride:
To be honest, the coherency of your work is practically "spotless" IMO (certainly a league above the Entropia norm for me), so I didn't feel the need to give any feedback, but nevertheless I'll go through the chapters that you did tonight and see what parts I think need fixing...
@Kanol: From my perspective, you're loudly insisting that something is literal feces when all of my senses and other objective facts tell me that it's just a chocolate-based food item, and is in no way remotely similar to the last pile of actual feces that I've had the dubious "pleasure" of...
@Gunlord500:
Except when it comes to fans who choose to send them feedback about typos and such via DM out of respect (no need to publicly draw attention to how they kept making mistakes in several releases in a row), get genuinely confused when suddenly their feedback no longer results in...
@Kanol: And there you go with portraying your subjective opinions as objective fact. Who died and crowned you as infallible judge of what is and isn't poor storytelling?
Also, pot calling the kettle black on the "respond to things I didn't say", because I never said anything about anyone...
@JulesMFinWinnfield: I think you put it far better than I could've done even if I spent hours trying to do it. The only thing missing is what to do when giving honest feedback results in the group being utter jerks (whether it be from merely offering feedback or because it's "excessively...
@nobaka:
If you ever remember/find the specific chapter in which this is revealed, please share with us.
@xxsaznpride:
Well, this is a relief. You kept me on edge ever since you said that (paraphrasing) you're doing this only because you want to and will stop when you feel like it (implying...
@Kanol: Just because you didn't like it doesn't mean that nobody else could. And to preempt your most probable response, no, just because you may find it creepy that a person could actually like this doesn't necessarily that said person is creepy and disgusting for liking it.