I'm impressed. The last few chapters have been a waste of time and space, completely useless. This chapter was only about 60-70% useless, dramatic improvement in reading quality
The plot devices used in this chap are all over the place....it's like I'm reading the thoughts of someone with ADHD having a panic attack.
Imagine being one of the people in the comment section who are giving lengthy lore dumps. Hello fellow autists! Don't over do it, people won't read lengthy...
What a waste of 30 seconds that was to read.
I'm gonna take 5 minutes to complain about loosing 30 seconds because that's just how much this tiny chapter annoyed me.
Get a longer chapter or fill it with important stuff.
If individual chapters could be rated, I'd give this one a 1/10, a point...
Hard to read art...
But also not sure if I'm into the story. I feel like CH2 coulda been expanded and explained more, and divided into two chapters instead of one. I'll read for now
Just because the time sensitive plot device hasn't been used in the last two days, doesn't mean people want to see it again.
There's no suspension or drama cos either it's fine or the plot device wouldn't have been used.