lol, I feel like the og heroine can't really pull fake tears because our mc is younger than her so many people would find it odd too, and it wouldn't be too effective villainising a 5 year old, I want to like this og heroine but she's probably going to be a bad guy.
anatomy's a bit wonky but this is good! your shading and tone is great, and the story is interesting (always a sucker for otome isekai), look forward to more! Thanks for your hard work.
...so confusing, I think I'm going to drop this, I was only able to read this far because I read it in one sitting and was waiting for the other characters mentioned to finally be introduced but we don't even have that, ouch. Thanks for your hard work though! The people working on this are...
Mmm. I don't like Aquila, seriously that grape dude (sorry don't remember his name either) is her friend, Aquila is not; she doesn't even know the dude and he's acting so possessive (and if she was close with Aquila, I'd still be annoyed at that), good grace. 1st prince hasn't even shown up but...
@wkread exactly! like even if he's good now, you can't disregard all he's done, and if Lamia trusted the ML I'd think she was an idiot, and it would be horrible to disregard what happened to her brother.
Oh I just remembered, Aquila threatened to murder Uri's whole family in the flashback, makes sense why he wouldn't want Lamia to become close with him, y'know, so she doesn't get murdered (I mean we know he wouldn't but from a rational point of view, it wouldn't make sense).
probably not fair to judge the ML now so I won't but he is kind of sketchy, and @venuslvnda lol yeah. still I think it's fair Lamia is acting this way, given what's happened.