This is a fun read. I thought it would be a bonding story between the mc and the cinderella but instead i get cougar town and i actually kinda liked it since all the girls seems happy too. :)
This is horrendous. I'm the kind of person that doesn't mind the logic of the story as much but as long as it is stringing me along the ride I can enjoy it. But this doesnt even have that. I have no idea what is happening throughout the story. New problems kept being thrown in without any...
I'm dropping this. The pacing is all over the place. I dont mind logic and all that but the story is deliberately not letting me follow it. Nothing has any resolution but new problems are being thrown in. Hope you guys enjoy the rest.
imma be honest. I dont like this progression. It's boring as hell. I feel like it didnt have any build up and there arent much at stake here. But it does goes straight to the point ill give ya that.
@krispy well if you're beaten down just about everyday for two years without anyone else as a scale you would be lacking confidence too. That's just how things works. That's why after training you should test your might with someone of your same level to gauge your improvement but maybe they...