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Author has to keep coming up with stupid excuses for the MC to get involved because he's got such sh*tty character development

So stupid, these guys have murdered innocent beatsmen and they just tried to kill you. It's also clear that he is going to run away and come back with more people to try to murder you again. There is no reason why any sane human being would not finish him off. Even if the MC is meant to be a...

How the f*ck does a newborn baby know the way out!? Even it has a strong sense of smell, it shouldn't have a clue what it's smelling because it's never encountered it before This author is on crack

This MC is so annoying...

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"Shounen Maou" more like "Me and my nakama will defeat the demon lords!" Can't say I mind -- I'm enjoying the story -- but it's a bit cringe when he keeps calling himself a realist

loli elf is lying

I don't like where this is going - I don't like that he hasn't broken that slave seal - I don't like that he hasn't made any obvious attempt at practising the magic he claims to be pursuing - I don't like how he's getting this elite woman to swear loyalty to the princess instead of him, given...

@_stultus I don't think so, she was still wearing her shorts And yeah it was pretty dumb how the MC just waited for them to get dragged off. Then he rushes up and is like "are you okay!?" @_@

So stupid! The forest is big enough that you can ride a giant cat out but you don't have space to swing a sword? And your enemies are archers... how is entering an open space where the archers can shoot you better than swinging your katana in a forest full of natural cover?? It would give you...

This is skirting too close to NTR for my liking

@tumbuang Well said

Why did she snatch the food and run behind a pillar when he was giving it to her anyway lol Then she just came back for more food like nothing happened

This outfit stands out too much... *changes into gaudy black outfit* EDIT: Lol, I just read the other comments... I could say that my comment isn't that original but I'd rather argue that great minds think alike

Ah damn, I really liked that crazy girl. I wanted her to change sides... since she's dead, it would be cool if they used magic to revive her as an undead follower or something @Tamerlane Yeah, true, there's basically no way that would work without tearing her body open (mouth included) and all...

@MTHeart75 lollll I was literally about to comment that word for word

@weebycunt Well said 😁 This MC is pretty pathetic and melodramatic

@OmegaDragon I hope so, that guy's really pissing me off lol

This story is a train wreck and everyone in it is a psycho The MC is talking mad shit about wiping out humanity but he got his ass handed to him by a few squads from one city Naruto girl is upset about the MC's killing spree but got everyone murdered by stopping the MC from finishing off that...