@SaraAki Hopefully I didn't come across rude as that was not my intention, I know text can kind of misinterpret that. I can definitely sympathize with missing stuff when the work is being done late at night.
@SaraAki Two things in this chapter in regards to translation and spelling.
Firstly, before I make any assumptions towards anyone, is "movie" really an accurate translation for the historical fantasy setting this appears to be set in?
Secondly, it's not "corps" since that's a military unit...
@htt Yeah I like grammarly and all, but but after using their program for like 2 years I've found it exceptionally sucks at coherent sentences that follow grammar rules. Which their program would follow the "rules" that page would list so I wouldn't take it as 100% fact since there are many...
@htt As a native English speaker, a woman wouldn't "get pregnant with baby" she would "get pregnant with a baby"
Since the word "baby" starts with a consonant, you would use "a" before it. Compared to the word "owl" which would result in using "an" since it starts with a vowel...
Spelling mistake in the lines:
"The feeling of flying is incredible*"
It's "incredible" not "incerdible"
"I wasn't able to activate that lightning* magic stone"
"Lightning" not "Lightninhg"
"I still* can't fly without you"
"Still" not "Stil"
"If I am able to figure out its* principles"...
@htt I'm really not sure why people want you to put "the" before "baby" since it isn't grammatically correct with or without it. The line should either be: "Getting pregnant with a baby is the worst we've ever been scolded, huh..." OR "Getting pregnant is the worst we've ever been scolded...