To be honest, this is something that a proofreader can fix easily enough.
Just try to find a person who could correct your grammar and you'll be set.
As a request though, please don't use "oo-sama" instead of the king...
Probably should be "person like you" instead of "person you like".
Love the flashback, hopefully we'll see the confession too. I honestly love this couple more than Narumi and Hirotaka.
I'm not a big fan of gender bender or body swap but I've been reading Reborn as My Love Rival’s Wife and loving it. MC is hilarious and one of the things I love is that translator refers to him as "he" during narration, instead of "she". That's a big pet peeve of mine and one of the reasons I...