@Eksentrysyti It's not really that confusing. He was having regrets about bringing her into the world of mages (which I'll admit seems out of character), so he did what all MCs do in that situation: Not consider the other person's feelings.
@pants 7 is "good," but what you just described would go under "uninteresting." You described a 5 or a 6.
I completely understand the rating going down from where it is now if your assessment is on the mark.
Edit: After reading it, I wouldn't say it has no plot or character development though...