Im sorry before, i read both raw and your translation, i just want to make suggestions so that your translation could be better.
The first sentence, rather than "he said" i think it's "i said" that would correlate with her previous conversation with the man in the inn before.
I was confused in the part "why is it like there's two people" (the photographer after vampire shoot) when i read the raw, i thought it was "why is there two shadow here?" (Which would mentioned in the future chap that there's suspicious shadow that keep appearing around yeonwoo)
Even so, I'm...
Foresight gave him a sight where that sword supposed to stab him, and knowing it, he could evade it so that it wouldn't stab his heart, that's how he survived