at first i wasnt going to read this cause i saw the bad typesetting but glad i read through the comments to that said the translation was good. Glad i kept reading cause even tho the typeset leaves much to be desired but the translation was good. Thank you people in the comments
@Asbolus
Have you not seen Shrek? Thats totally what your suppose to do to protest a wedding. Granted its usually at the altar when this happens and not the proposal part. https://youtu.be/DMWBObHy5_U?t=75
i was super confused and like wtf when i saw that the name was 'End' since the first one was called Alpha. but glad to see even tho this chapter isnt changed the future chapters will be. and bruuhh the hype looks like a fire water spirit c c c c combo!
So far your translation and quaility seems pretty good. even the type setting is pretty good. i hope you pump out more chapter soon dude. Remember the more chapters you pump out the better your procrastination will be for your finals! YAY PROCRASTINATION!
ugh tried reading it but its bad imo compared to the others. ima just wait. if your gonna snipe a series at least do a better job than the people you are sniping from >.>
@tehsdragon nah i think the grappel rope thing is another configuration from his OP weapon. but i dont see why he had to go to her side though. She could of just climbed across the rope >.>
@senjiQ well since its a virtual world. either a 4th one could spawn in the box if she didnt die.( since we seen them spawn a hydra i dont think a small (green?) ball would be to hard.)
the 4th participant could of been the tie breaker when trying to figure out clues or something
still dont understand why they would be hesitate to spend the points. has it been explained that if they keep the points the get that in money if they looks or something? unless im missing something there should be no reason not to spend the points.
The arthor could of did a better job writing...