"The one sitting before you is a ruined middle aged man donning a single pair of underpants."
Donning is incorrect here as its the act of actively putting something on, it should be wearing.
This was enjoyable at first but its far too slow. It's just sort of boring at this point.
"The lost princess had a good head to judge the crown prince and hide her identity but then the westener king... she had no reason to judge based on rumors.
I guess the author cares about the plot rather...
" I don't like weak white lotuses who take forever to finally get revenge when it's actually really simple and easy."
I'd be interested to see what you consider "really simple and easy"?
Bollocks, the idea that your personality is entirely your mind is straight up nonsense. Hormones and brain chemistry are the dominant elements of what shapes emotion and response and they are wildly different between an adult and a child.
The MC is pretty unlikeable which is fine in itself. But he's also pretty boring.
This story does not do a good job of helping the reader maintain their suspension of disbelief.
This is tonally all over the place. The world setup makes it hard to take seriously but then theres rape and murder everywhere. It just feels pretty off in general.
Haha, how the fuck is "He died" a spoiler? It's in the fucking series description, its literally the first line of it:
"Reid, one of the six great heroes of legend, lost his life during a fight with a demon"
Yeah the kid is definitely "too soft" he should totally somehow beat up a fully grown adult who's abusing him, if only he as an "alpha". Fuck me, what an unpleasant combination of idiocy and victim blaming.
This is "fine". Though that cover is repellent.
The "racism" makes perfect sense given the setting as described. The Lost are straight up weaker than other people because of their souls being unstable, we're explicitly told this and given examples of it in the story. The Lost also seem fairly common and most of them die quickly, so peoples...
The name and the description make it pretty clear its a cookie cutter genre piece i.e. it's going to be fairly "generic". So if you read it and then complain its generic, that's not a fault with the story, its on you for doing something you knew you werent going to enjoy (I feel the "like an...