I've read other comics where you go 20 chapters before you realize the protagonist's goals are different than what you assumed they were. This comic seems to be overcompensating in the other direction, spending half a chapter repeating the same thoughts and goals for the protagonist.
Thanks for picking this series up. It's one of my favorites. You did a fantastic job on the translation and effects.
If you ever need help translating/editing it, I've got a copy of Photoshop, a Japanese/English dictionary, and enough knowledge to be dangerous. Just send me a message.