Image 11, in the first panel's first bubble, "have been" and "feels" in your original don't match tense. Looking at the raw and using my cruddy Japanese, I believe it should be something like "even if there are times in my life that feel as happy and beautiful as a dream."
Thanks for your work...
@BarakRhys On image 5-6, you have "marqui" in a few places instead of marquis. On image 5, one place also has "Reed Baren" but elsewhere it's always "Reid-Baren."
The discussion above about boyfriend/lover: in the Japanese, her sister only asks "男子(= danshi)?" and the response is "そうよ(=sou yo)?". Danshi just means boy even if she might be hoping it could be a boyfriend. The response is just like "that's right, [and why do you ask/what does it matter]?"
@BarakRhys Image 5, the QC note that says "if you you what" should probably be "if you know what."
Image 7, "wywerns" should be "wyverns." That bubble should also probably be something like "a wyvern ambush..." or "the wyverns ambushed..."
Image 17, "various voodoos" should be something like "various voodoo spells/magic" and "less portion" should be "smaller portions."
Image 21, "fae" should be "face," I assume.
Image 28, I think "every last one of the people who are by my side is trash" should match the verbs (both "is" or...
@SxThx Image 3, "althought" should be "although."
Image 4, "even with many entertainmnts, they all began to turn boring" should be something like "even with many diversions, they started becoming restless." "You're getting better, Pram. Very well." should probably be something like "well...