He could just be stepping up knowing she will protect him, at the same time earning her trust. It’s apparent that she’s been approached by people with hidden agenda’s. Who’s to say he’s not one. Plus she’s infamous in the whole school with her black hair, so it seems like an obvious scheme.
As...
Sad part is she’ll be main girl according to anime/manga logic. Anime logic shows MC gets abused then feels touched when she acts a little bit nice. The modicum of niceness is enough to melt the MC’s heart. Hard to believe right? I can’t believe this either, well Japan calls it “Gap Moe”. The...
Wait... so Akane IS in love with him🤦♂️? And to top it all of a sharp tongued violent tsundere😅? This might be a trick, but if it’s not WHY?!
Tsundere: the friend who always mocks, abuses and discourages MC while being in love with them. They have a hard time admitting they’re in love but...
How did Akane manage to see that light while the friend didn’t because of the “crowd”? They were together and I’m sure they’d be looking at the victim intently but somehow only Akane saw it? Furthermore any normal person would ignore it and think their eyes were playing tricks on them. I feel a...
Why didn’t the enemy commander set sentries to watch the enemies movements? Why do the pikemen at the front not at least have a buckler (shield)? If this was such an important battle why send such weak commanders and poorly equipped infantry?
She wants to get to know him without opening up, but is willing to tell a stranger her secrets. I can’t... everyone has secrets they don’t want to or can’t share and she acts like a victim when he doesn’t want to reveal his past. That’s not a friend or a companion if they make you tell them...
Why can’t the MC have a proper conversation with his partner. It’s common for couples to talk things over. He just kept silent and let it get out of control. The girl is the victim. Some people do certain actions and don’t realize it’s hurting the other more than it should.
The guy has guts to...
This is basically a clash of religion. Currently there’s still two countries at war because of religion. Many leaders attempt to stop it but the numerous believers kill them before the war can end. Forgot the countries names but yeah it’s a radical way of thinking.
It’s no different than...
So many coincidences for the beginning of a story. Better to use less, for immersion.
•He coincidentally wasn’t teleported with the class(Construct a basis for the story).
•He coincidentally was the strongest out of the bunch (supposedly easier to write and catered towards one punch...
Honestly this is the most exposed spy mission ever. She’s there to gather information on the village while also reporting any suspicious activity, hence the title “overseer”. How is this undercover?
Man: Hey! We’re sending someone over to watch your every move.
Person: alright
Man: make sure...