The image of the destruction of the mountain is laughable. It'd be more believable if it was the result of a magical attack. Sure those guns would carve out sizable craters, but no amount of conventional weapons would be able to so cleanly vaporize a million tons of rock. They used artillery...
I'm starting to get the feeling that for something with "Romcom" in its title, this is more rom/drama than com.
The person you were planning revenge against was secretly planning revenge against you? That's pretty meta, but where do you go from there? It just seems like the story is setting...
@Everfool
By that logic, doesn't being dense imply being insensitive as well? Dense is the identifier, insensitive used to describe the consequent action? I'm being real nitpicky here, I just couldn't help but think that "the three obstacles of love" could be simplified to two haha
@fedewi3 you're right, I forgot about that! And the movie did a pretty good job of reminding Captain America that he was chosen because of his heart, not appearance. Maybe this story will be alright too.
@Taikutsu18 would you mind explaning? I'm not very familiar with Marvel, whose looks did they change from ugly to good-looking so they could be a hero?
It's kinda annoying that the MC needs to be good-looking so the author changed his appearance. Like, either keep him ugly or make him good-looking from the beginning. The story tries to take a moral high ground by showing he was bullied for the sole reason of his appearance, and then decides...