It's too bad you're dropping this (all other "sniping" drama aside). I read the other version first, and it's pretty questionable in a lot of places, such as translating "pillow" as "bolster"... I read your version hoping to see if you had translated Stefan's pink text near the end of the...
I also wasn't a fan of this chapter (or rather, Tomari specifically). Maybe, now that she's finished realizing that she likes Chikage, she'll stop being such a weird, spazzing idiot?
Everyone's complaining about it, but I actually liked the recent development in this chapter. It changed the relationship tension between Noel and Luca from "I like them, but they don't like me" to "I have a complicated past and I don't want to talk about it." I find the latter a lot more...
To everyone wondering if this is the end - I checked the raws for season 2, and the last episode that was posted (this one) was uploaded on July of last year. There's also no hiatus notice that I can tell...