For someone doing this all on their lownsome... this is pretty alright. It could definitely use a proof reader (hit me up ?), but otherwise the premise seems pretty fun and the art is neat. I think this could turn out nicely.
So uh... the mystery was kinda spoiled pretty quickly but that’s fine. There are still lots of questions to be answered. This looks like a pretty good series so far!
The storytelling on this one is pretty weird. Over time they introduce characters slowly, but they pretty much throw a bunch of random crap at you and then explain it later when it could have easily had a normal story progression and still be fun to read.
Despite the fact that the rating for the manga is around a 5, is this still worth trying at least? I usually equate a lower score like this to be a sign that I shouldn’t even attempt to read something, but I like the art style so I’m somewhat torn as to what I should do...
This is pretty fun. It’s a take on the isekai genre that’s not extremely new, but it’s somewhat refreshing as the MC is trying to dig himself out of a rut that another version of himself created. It’s been a pretty funny read so far.
Over a longer period of time I feel that this could have been fleshed out much better than it is with only 16 chapters. I won’t say the ending is disappointing, but it’s definitly kinda meh.