Is bullying this severe in Japan or do mangas over exaggerate it? Like if any of the things this girl went through happened in an American school (vandalized desk, locker full of trash and a dead rodent, getting her hand fucking stabbed repeatedly, etc) then there would be serious consequences...
You did a great job with translation and clean up! I would have never known that this was your first attempt.
This is off to a great start, can’t wait to see where it goes