@SmartBirb This chapter is much better than the previous chapters tbh. It looks like the TL have a proofreader now that is doing their job well. If you're still unsatisfied, just reread chapter 1, 1.2, and 2. Those 3 chapters came out when the TL had no one to proofread it, hence the mistakes...
This version is easier to comprehend than the other version. Coincidentally, I'm just beginning to read this series so this is nice. I was rereading Samurai Pyjamas's version a few times but still can't comprehend the last few pages of the first chapter.
Rip karellen :')
For real, everything happens so fast but somehow her death makes it sad despite she only has appeared for 2/3 chapters. Man and here I am hoping that I can see them grow as a family together. Welp, dammit.