@Azure_1802 I used to read this one : https://orientalheroestigerwong.blogspot.com/2019/09/oriental-heroes-aka-tiger-wong-00-96.html... it has mary sue villain, eventually, that kind of ruin the story, but before it was really interesting...
I also read/watched some old dramas like The trilogy...
@Tamerlane We gave too much credit for the author.....😆😆
Apparently black n white chars are better accepted by readers....(n prob easier to develop as well)...
Im Dal Young is really a capable writer...
I read a lot of his works and when he is engage in his work it is truly awesome..
Whether its story, art, joke, moment of despair and happiness...
And what truly hook me is his sense of humor, it is refreshing...even for slapstick or simple cliche...
"Dont underestimate readers"......said someone who made a lot of raeg in the past......🤣🤣🤣
Well....actually some raeg are good.....and its dividing opinion anyways....
(Honoka and Yuzuha team...)
Now, this is a 2nd time i make corrections for u (out of my free time while i wait my game download finished)....
- page 1 : grimoire the great mage - kitab sihir penyihir legendaris Flamme, katamu ?? (dont be lazy, guys)
- page 2 : ini adalah yang paling buruk - ini adalah yang paling...
Ada beberapa kesalahan / kekurang terpatan dalam penerjemahannya, misal :
- halaman 5 : "berbisnis di sini lumayan lancar", seharusnya "bisnis di sini sedang di ambang kehancuran"
- halaman 6 : "saat aku masih kecil....", seharusnya "waktu ke sini sebelumya, aku masih kecil, karenanya aku tidak...
@WhisCalifa69 i already write a long reply but somehow it got deleted... technically i push a wrong button...
in short :
- I think you are being nitpick about ur comment on smile...
- I dont believe the boys was Yuri's henchmen... she was simply channel her anger without any agenda...
(her...
@WhisCalifa69 i dont know about Yuri smile and stare, i dont think it is mentioned in the manga...
I do imagined what if I am in Souta position, and having same situation like him (poor and have a mother with a situation)....
I kinda get when he rejects Yuri kiss, since he probably feels...
to be honest this one is not something i expected...
Such a cliche..., irl it is really bless to have an escape with ur first love.....
Why mangaka cannot be honest...there can be another way to connect Haru with the kid, dont give us this cliche...
And the story was so strong back then....
@SNKY i dont buy it...for me it is romance with manga background, kimi was romance with school/campus/work background, and fuuka was romance with school/band background....
coz seo didnt put enough weigh on the theme you mentioned, not enough weigh about editor and author struggling and as well...