It definitely had potential but it still felt rough throughout. Not too surprised this one got cancelled. The ending was serviceable though, and most importantly
@colonelcrisp
I assume the serialization got canceled, in which case it was pretty good considering that. Honestly it might not have stood out as much if they hadn't JUST introduced a new character.
@DaoLaw
Dark matter isn't just theoretical, it's a quantifiably existing phenomenon, we just know very little about it. Though you could say there are proposed interpretations of dark matter that are just theoretical. Really in my mind something purely theoretical would be more like a string in...
@cherokeemoon
I mean he already does have some exceptions, he definitely has special cases for his siblings, like the reaction he has to his sisters being courted. And nothing about having an exception for romantic love as well would in any way devalue his love for people in general...
@bobo
Rough Sketch seems relatively distinct from either other work. However I see your point for the calligraphy and photography ones, they're both basically "overzealous senpai puts reasonable kouhai in unreasonable situation", but in one case they butt heads and in the other it's warm and...
@kronix
The MCs in the other two stories weren't beta? Also there are ways to convey that without necessarily making them fuck; saying that makes you sound like an edgy teen.