One of the parts of this story that I always enjoyed was that I could follow the chapter despite the chaotic art style, even during fight scenes. In both last chapter and this chapter, though, it has become much harder to do that. Bit of a shame, really.
Does anyone know if the poorly paced story and dialogue in this chapter is due to poor translation or just bad writing in the original language? The story isn't exactly a masterpiece overall, but this chapter felt rather egregiously poorly paced
On page 4 you wrote "nobel's child" instead of "noble's child" in the last panel.
Again on page 18.
On page 24 it should be "craftsmen" rather than "craftmens". On the same page, it should also be "But coming across good alcohol comes down to luck, which you can't do much about on your own."...