To be honest, this firestorm seems unnecessary, but then, most firestorms do. Machine translation sucks. That's pretty much just how things go. I can only assume that anyone who disagrees with me on that has extremely low standards. To say that someone who can't translate it or find someone who...
Right at the start of page 6, it should be "that many people" instead of "those many people". Keep up the good work, your chapters are so much better than Flame Scans' that it isn't even a contest.
In a rush rn so I can't provide a list of the errors, but this chapter has a lot of them. Leaving a lot of errors in for the initial upload to fuck with aggregators is a great idea, just so long as you update the chapter quickly after releasing it.
@KazutoKatsuragi here's where the bandits start raping her before he can intervene or something (or she is otherwise traumatized,) his plan falls apart, and it's all his fault for trying to manipulate her, whatever his reason for doing so.
Also, his plan is expressly to traumatize her to break...
I find it amusing that no one got that I wanted him to say what I wanted him to say because it would be romantic. I specifically wanted him to promise to make her happy or something of the sort because that would be romantic, even if he didn't mean it that way at the time and especially if she...