@liquidsword who're you, then? I'm a proofreader who enjoys the series, and I value a seamless reading experience. I asked if they (the group releasing this and no one else) wanted me to give them a list of the proofreading errors, because the errors found in the chapter are uncharacteristic of...
The proofreading for this chapter seems sub-par compared to the usual. I can point out the mistakes if you'd like, but shouldn't your proofreader be the one to fix such things?
I'm having a bit of a rough go or I'd volunteer as a proofreader myself, but please find a proofreader for this series before continuing to translate it (ideally re-do this chapter as well after you have one, but that's your choice).