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This guy is such an idiot. He wants to ask her about a kiss that drove her emotional state out of wack, and wants to keep proceeding to drive her emotional state out of wack. I don't get what is up with this guys brain.

Omg the feelz are strong ;-;

For real tho. @Vasqueztion

Where is this story going? The beginning was super strong imo, now its just nonsensical.

Im very satisfied with the writing in this story so far. I hope it keeps up.

They suck at being in a relationship, but they're learning slowly.

Why didnt anyone explain anything to Blade xD? Just tell him they like them romantically. Is he that stupid that he wouldn't understand that word?

I just think Canaria needs more awareness in general. In her surroundings and the logic/words she applies to situations xD. She seems to not think things through very much.

I hate it when characters are not perceptive, when they go "did I imagine that?". Its like bitch you just saw that shit! You have a brain! Idk how she wouldnt know exactly what that is on her neck at a first glance. Love you girlie but you is a dumb dumb.

@cillbosby As someone who has been literally been through both of those situations of the two protagonists, lemme tell ya it takes a bit. I feel like both of them have made a ton of progress, but are still figuring out how to be each others support. Hey those bumps in the road are how ya learn!

Thank you so much! Love to see this being continued.

Lol classic MC going about things in the dumbest way possible

@anotherone Humans are rational and logical creatures yes. If you character is not rational or is illogical, to me that signals bad writing. Your characters should have grounded reasons for their irrationality at the very least and hers I'm sure will make no sense when applied to Douglas. Her...

I just despise when characters act irrationally. Regardless of a dark past or not, it doesn't rob you of your sensibility. She has been harping on Douglas from the first time she met him, and now he destroyed the people who wronged her. How about a thank you for getting revenge for me? Everyone...

Ugh this girl just loves to throw tantrums for no reason geez

Well that was sad D:

@FredFriendly Doomsday clock is 2 minutes from midnight

Silly villain with a silly plan.

Not a terrible line of thinking, just wish she communicated more properly.