@comeonnow0 Those are all fair points. I still think that the way Rachel utilizes Marie's advice will do her no good in the long run, but I acknowledge that the narrative is structured in a way that will force anyone, if not everyone, to rely on her abilities no matter who they are.
@comeonnow0 I can't even begin to imagine how exhausting it must be to talk the way you do to complete strangers.
Anyways, even if it's a mutually beneficial relationship between Rachel and Marie, the benefits themselves are shortsighted. While Marie's visions have allowed Rachel to pull ahead...
Sometimes a romance doesn’t have to result in a complete transformation of character. It might just be a change in perception in how you already behave. Like this time the reaction would be “I now want to kiss you for that” rather than the usual “you’re so nice, thank you”.
And the setting is...
I like how Su Luxia possesses Liangxia whenever she needs the will to stand up for herself yet keeps her writing talent intact. It's a nice balance between fulfilling the target's wishes while also allowing the target to grow and develop on their own.
This is a lot better. I'm still iffy on the TL notes explaining the story for me, but they're far less intrusive and fewer in number. The quality of translation went up significantly, too. Thanks for working so hard to give this manhwa the care it deserves.
The notes reminding us of names and terms are a welcome addition, but the rest of them are essentially Sparknotes. I know you dont mean it this way, but my reading comprehension is just fine and I feel like I'm being patronized. I think you should leave the literary analysis to the comments...