I think he bit his cheek to keep his arousal in check. He's gonna want to get some medical attention if he bit it hard enough to deal with all THAT.
Also, I am 98% sure that's the dragonewt who keeps stalking Miia at the end.
@btnt Look man, if you need a proofreader just... My email is CrazyYanmega@Gmail.com
EDIT: So most of the worst of it comes from the first page which causes my inner grammar nazi to rise more. I can also sort of see why they might use slang, they are young teens now. But it's still mentally...
@btnt Aside from the "nani" and "wtf" usages...
Page 1 Panel 2: "Let me hit you!" seems like a bit of an odd phrase for giving someone a good luck charm.
Page 4 Panel 2: There probably should be a comma or period after "It's breakfast time right now."
Page 4 Panel 7: Aside from the "Nah" not...