I think you got the "diffusion type" and "basking type" bubbles mixed up on page 17, Diffusion would be the one that spreads through the whole cage. That or the author got it wrong.
@Abetillo Nobody was doing the Vtuber concept of "real person streaming as fake avatar" until really Kizuna Ai, in 2016. Even the Super Sonico thing was just pre-recorded video of a character, not much different from normal animation. Some people argue that Ami Yamato was the first Vtuber...
@Abetillo The first that could even remotely be considered a Vtuber was in 2010, with Nitroplus making Super Sonico videos. Financial ruin existed on a smaller level, but 2008 was the start of the global financial crisis/crises. As far as gacha goes, yeah I'd agree on that point, in terms of...
No offense, the translation is fine and all, but you gotta work on some proofreading. "We might just make turn that into fact" and stuff, there's a lot of minor grammatical errors.
It's worth noting that while giving someone a lead-lined cup nowadays would be considered attempted poisoning, lead WAS used in ancient times as a sweetener (for instance, the ancient Romans). With modern knowledge I'm sure the Nobu employees would see it and think murder, but it's entirely...
Interesting premise, and for a first time translation I'd say it's not too bad. The scan could use a little cleaning, but otherwise a decent job overall!