@TSHH
I would suggest for page 3 using "class" instead of "curse". This way it will match the diagram. "Basics" should also be singular, so "Basic class" . You could go with "course" as suggested earlier, but then you would have to change page 5 as well. Also, did elma ride in or on the cars?
@TSHH
Thank you for the chapter. You have typo of sorts...on page 3 where lucoa is writing in the sand she says "in an inhabited", but what I think she means to say is "on an uninhabited".
@ScarecrowB
Thanks for the chapter,
Typo on the top of page 9: Plumber -> plumper
and page 17: Thinks -> things
and page 20: I such an awful.....I'm such an awful
and page 24: riana -> riona and you might want to take a look at that awkward sentence in the next panel.