@brachydonger
On page 18 "Man, I'm so glad a boy like you saved me" is on 2 balloons, one has been overwritten.
Also check the raws for page 18 &19, "Women can turn on you..." it's on both pages.
@Maru_chan
Typo on page 8: "We was taking ..." >> "We were taking ..."
Typos on page 14:
"Listen o me ..." >> "Listen to me ..."
"... infantry solider is ..." >> "... infantry soldier is ..."
Typos on page 14: "Al tank ..." >> "All tank ..."
Typo on page 23: "To be sent home! In the first ..."...
@casteryvan
On page 12:
".. have other accomplice ..." >> ".. have other accomplices ..." (twice in the page) / (Also, "accomplices" sounds weird, maybe "companions" or something else would be better?)
"It is a power which can give precise support, ..." > This translation sounds weird....
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@Skillgg
Typos on page 6:
bouldeing >> bouldering
preffer >> prefer
Typos on page 9:
biuro >> ??? (building?)
gilotine >> guillotine
painfull >> painful
Typo on page 11: elevator malfunctioned >> the elevator malfunctioned
@Skillgg
Typo on page 20: "I brought delivery ..." >> "I brought a delivery ..."
Typo on page 21: "Rlly?" >> "Really?"
Typo on page 22: "... and run away" >> "... and ran away"
Typos on page 27:
powerfull >> powerful
tutition >> tuition
Typo on page 28: Nosebleed >> The nosebleed
Typo on page...
@Skillgg
Typo on page 6: pedesrians >> pedestrians
Typo on page 16: turnred >> turned
On page 18 instead of "You're lying!!" it would be better to write "You're kidding!!"
Typo on page 16: Kaznaki-san >> Kanzaki-san
@vigorousjammer
On page 26 "were aal" was supposed to be "were eel" or something like that? Wasn't "eel man" before?
Also, on page 28 "electro-magantic waves" was supposed to be "electro-magnetic waves"?