@CategoryG
Typos on page 9:
"When he is he gets talking," >> "When he gets talking," (? check if it's good like this.)
"... different to usual." >> "... different than usual."
@negavamas
Typo on page 6: "The took care ..." >> "He took care ..."
Typo on page 15: "It's good to se you are okay" >> "It's good to see you are okay"
@Maru_chan
Typos on page 7:
"These are our wounded ..." >> "These were our wounded ..."
"After this scene, I no longer feel any pity" >> "After that scene, I no longer felt any pity"
Typos on page 10:
"Unfortunately I cannot show you." >> "Unfortunately I cannot."
"She died in a snipers duel" >>...