had to go back and see what allexio said, pretty sure he's referring to the commnet where he's basically doing what a proofreader would and fixing the wording
the Dragon ball z reference was kinda distracting but i would probably do the same thing so w/e
what was weird to me was he panel with the potion floating in the air above the mountains talking about supplies and stuff but the text never said anything about them
it seems fine, you can just scroll past it if you don't want to read it, some of it was helpful so i think it's fine.
at some point tho TL needs to leave the whole 14.2 thing in the past in the long run it doesn't matter.
I appreciate the work put in, but that doesn't mean everyone will, and...