I really don't know how I am going to rate this. This is a big character flesh out that was needed with the previous chapter. I am just going to a say a 8/10 as 1 point taken off for using an extra chapter to do this and 1 point taken off for the cock and ball torture
Gonna say, now that I got 9 hours of sleep I feel refreshed and ready to review.
I would rate this a 9.99/10 because the story is I shall look forward to potentially reading Akio Nane's future works.
I shouldn't be reviewing at this point since I don't want to awake anymore. Therefore, why isn't there chapters of JOJO Part 1 that involves Johnathan Joestar comparing bra sizes with Erina?????????
also wtf happene dto the order of the pages or am I getting delusional. Well...
!RemindMe 1 Day...
Oh god my judgement really is getting cloudy and my reactions are nearly 1.2x slower. Let's review this.
This specific chapter has a big change that isn't good or bad to the way the normal plot goes. Either way, I should go to sleep or I might get a "strange feeling of slight irritation."Also...
Super short but quite nice of a story. 10/10 the characters were at least fleshed out enough in 7 pages and the plot made sense. Also new art style! I like it. I shall look at Mori Seishirou artworks with great interests( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
darn the first 5/10. This is just really decent. Art is nice, but that doesn't say too much considering how everyone's art here is nice. This just I'll still be looking for Kabocha's work as his art seems promising but the current plot was lacking.
Also it is approaching 1AM so my judgement is...
Huh never expected something like that. Turned into a monster Musume scenario. Either way, New standards. 2 types, 34 page ones and short stories will be "graded" differently. 1 is "How the fuck did you mess it up it literally shouldn't be possible" and a 10 is what I would give a 7 for 34 page...
I can't rate something that becomes so bizarre that it is good. 8/10 I guess for not fleshing out the characters that much even though this will continue later (If i am correct)
Time to make my ratings relative. 1 for oh god what the fuck happened here and 10 for a story that has been beautifully created in only 34 pages!
I would rater this a 9/10 for getting good but not good enough.
Time to leave a comment on at least every single one of these chapters that initially had none.
. It also happens in other areas where there isn't even a sign up and all we see is just the boy instantly get dressed for the pool. Would rather have narancia hentai.[/spoiler]
Holy fuck these chapters are long. No wonder these are taking forever. Either way magical panty stealing and returning powers are nice but at the same time does it work on yourself?
In an alternate universe, him learning on her caused a cause of unintentional vehicular homicide. Thus creating a weird relationship that also involves hiding a body