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She's too devoted and that's where the complaint, I feel, sprouts from. I don't like that she's too in love with Kaid I don't like the fat villain who seems to be all black. Tim as a villain alone is well enough for me. The complicated emotions, in my opinion, should've been the driving force...

there's so much depth. My emotions are all in a mix.

I wasn't gonna cry but the longer I linger on that last moment... I cry

I came here for this. Bring me more chapters like this.

I hope it takes wayyyyy longer for them to get together. I can't approve as of right now.

this hurt. It got me... pretty good.

She's the avatar. She'll show up when they need her the most.

I kinda expected Arcane to be long-haired, no surprise there. They're all beautiful though tbh so why all the simping for Arcane?

Such a fun chapter

... it be looking like a turd... I mean coal.

The guy looked so evil saying "Malham pie". I cracked up.

I cried. One of the better backstory-deaths I've read but like @/Your_Mind I was hoping for a bit more chapters of her struggling with her new reality. To those calling her childish. She IS a child. Just because she's going to college when she died does not make her an adult. That's not the...

I like that the bad comments are buried with ones of understanding and praise for the realness of her reaction.

I love how attached she is to her previous life. We always get those who are abused or lonely but this girl had people she loved and didn't want to leave. And they loved her back in return. So... If you're judging her harshly then you don't understand the confusion, pain, and yearning she's...

Haha laughed so hard when she got kissed by her dad on the cheeks.

I'm really loving this.

I'm even more sus about the fall now especially since she's an athlete. But also one of the best isekai deaths I've read so far.

@jaellasster I feel that your comment made it 10x sadder for me. I'm surprised her body didn't instinctually try to stop the fall. What happened that none of it registered for her, especially at that height of a fall?

@Rune_Storm19 Ah yeahh! 30 lol My math.😅 Still would like to know what she does for a living though.

I want moar. This is so good. I bet that thot made it seem like Jayna was trying to stop her from coming and told Louise, maybe. (In the past at least.) But I guess that wouldn't be enough for Lousie to stop being friends with Jayna. I'm super curious.