Now the enemy is fucked :D and after the battle, a lot of people (players and NPCs) might be pissed he didn't do that earlier so people wouldn't have had to die. :C
hmm think on the last page the crying kid is the light spirit. Hah, light is normally good in stories but in this story, they went with light have menacing abilities.
damn such a long wait for this chapter on a cliff hanger and then we get another cliff hanger. xD
Please Melisssa tell your nanny about the shit storm you're trying to get out of and the 2 shit heads trying to pull you back in... and redo the brother's education in fucking manners! and common sense! PLEEEEAAAASEEE!?
page 14 middle panel, you're missing an 'a' in villagers
"...holding a banquet for 'villgers' of tiny town..." = "...holding a banquet for 'villagers*' of tiny town..."