Hey, I have a few typos or really awkward things to report since you asked:
On page 1, it should be "salon" instead of "saloon" (that's a bar in the Wild West)
On page 4, calling the hair "my clump" sounds really weird for some reason. Like something you might dig out of a drain. I might call...
You really can get anything in a vending machine in Japan.
I don't think I'm going to continue this... I'm kind of grossed out. Plus I keep having flashbacks to those brutal death scenes from Shadow Star Narutaru. I didn't watch it, but saw some clips.
Is she trying to rape him? It really looks like she's trying to rape him.
I see she herself was exploiting the #MeToo movement (technically it wasn't a thing yet, but still) earlier in the chapter