The messages on page 10 make no sense in this translation. He's clearly talking directly to her by ordering her to use the map, so steffortless' translation of "I'm lost" makes much more sense than "She's lost".
Even without comparing to another translation, these last couple chapters have a...
I haven't checked the raws but mito's last bubble on page 9 seems a bit off.
In context it would make more sense for him to say "but it's what I think all the time" instead of "is that what you think all the time".
Can someone from Cyan check the raw and translation for this please?
@Bramia they were persecuted by the same church they believed in, not a different church. Vienna's church/cult.
The father is a cardinal for the church and blames the pope for their persecution (presumably the father didn't want to pay his bribes or didn't pay enough).
They're being called...
"You don't look like a young lady at all" the phrasing makes it seem like she's crossdressing or something. Would probably be better as either "the young lady" or "a noble young lady"
"Carlo was really scared" shouldn't it be 'scary'?
Also, was the sudden drop in quality of the font in one of...
page 8: that last sentence is weird, were you going for "and so the case was closed with Abelheid's desire to conquer the world not even widely known"? or you could drop the 'even' for "... not widely known"?
page 12: "... tried to take it over ..."
page 14: "I wish for the best of luck for...
You sure it wasn't the guy that was poisoning the food?
It makes no sense for her to poison the guy's food based on the panel and the previous pages.
The japanese also doesn't specify the subject of the sentence.
Page 10 has some weird lines.
"Eat up everyone" even though nobody will be eating for a while? (because it'll take time to prepare the food)
"Putting some sesame seeds onto the noodles" but those aren't noodles?
@MagicalCarcrash it's his nightmare.
On another note, am I the only one bothered by them eating brains? Like, prions and mad cow disease?
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@Renard we get a pretty good look at pages 18 and 25
@ubre
On page 13 there's some untranslated text, reading ダーウィンもびっくり, which on the context would be "even Darwin would be surprised" (by his appearance's change)