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@twomotherstacos you might understand the japanese, but if you don't translate it into proper english then it's a mistranslation. The current wording doesn't make sense. "you're the type to date someone you don't like even if they confessed to you" imparts a completely different meaning from the...

On page 9, either a layer mess up or forgot to clean that part.

I guess lack of redrawing, bad cleaning and bad typesetting go hand in hand...

@Anonymous_Kitty Why is it called a game in page 6, even though everything else points to it being a manga?

On page 4 that sentence doesn't make sense. I haven't read the raws but it's probably something like "this passage leads to the residential area // we can't involve non-combatants" On page 7, what do you mean by "the water is very solid"? That doesn't make sense. On page 10, "it looks tending...

On page 13, rice ticket? Not meal ticket? Edit: looking at the extra, it makes more sense, but I'd still check

Wrong placement of text on page 16

@Simpleton wtf, how did you get that from the dialogue? Nobody ever mentioned biographies here, and why would they ever hire someone for that? Why would he even mention his left hand if it was for something like a biography? The old man can write just fine, he even said he wrote a paper while...

Page 16, should be "separate" Page 27, should be "lets" instead of "let's"

On page 27, it should be "double suicide"

Page 14 wasn't cleaned properly

@Kathartes this might be a little late, but the guy in chapter 5 is No. 25, not No.31. No. 31 died.

On page 26, is that out-of-bubble line on purpose? Shouldn't it be at least stroked if so?

My mind jumped straight to dragon murder when that steak arrived

Please level the pages a bit, or at least change them to grayscale. Currently the blacks are brown, and it looks pretty ugly.

Page 11 "ktill franco"

"Several of Balud's objectives were (...)" Missing s, page 17

@arkvin she's probably the character from the LN that hasn't appeared in the WN yet (according to what kuma translations said on the credits page)

Random Lorem Ipsum on page 20

Some basic levelling would do so much for this...