Oh look, another rental girlfriend dumpster fire I can enjoy ragging on a weekly basis.
But please get a grammar checker, this looks like it was fed through multiple google translates.
Okay, that explains her hostility in a way that doesn't make her look like an awful person. If I saw someone as a mass of black miasma I'd probably be dubious of their intentions too. It'll be interesting to see how she overcomes that barrier.
Did we just get an entire chapter without background characters creepily commenting on the girls? Amazing!
@MesaOracle I can't believe you've done this.
I hate Mami but I seriously want to see more of her because she was interesting. There was room there for some great conflict. A shame the author has forgotten her except to narrate the rules of a children's game in a single panel.
People actually think he's sparing those little shit kids? No way. I haven't read the novels but know exactly where this is going. He's stripped the town of water, so the adults will probably tear the kids to shreds to drink their blood or something.
I like Mizuhara, really I do. But it's chapters like this that remind me the supporting cast really carry the main cast. Speaking of supporting cast, whatever the heck happened to Mami? She just kinda disappeared. Did the author forget she existed? Did her character arc get resolved and I...
It'd be nice if you'd be more consistent with the elf kid's pronouns. Is it a he or a she? Or is it genderfluid enough that it changes many times in a single conversation?