Lol, Edelgarde already sniped the superior scanlator group Tritinia off of this very series. What goes around comes around. Shame that this "snipe" seems to be just a one-off for fun.
Why was this mage drawn like she's straight out of a hentai? Oh, right, to keep us awake while we read a transcript of a video game that we don't actually get to play, instead of a real fight. zzzzzzzzzzz
Edelgarde snipes and is sniped in turn. Currently Edelgarde is the one doing the most legible job, but I really could not care less if they're inconvenienced, lol. It's the circle of liiiiife.
What the hell, Edelgarde? Why are you doing this? Is this a case of "even bad attention is better than no attention"?
Your translations are better than raw MTLs, and that's about the best that can be said for them. I don't think your mastery of grammar even qualifies as "fluent" in the English...
It's rare to find a translation for a decent series that's so bad I don't even want to read it. Here's one. It's not even Duwang levels of so bad it's funny, it's just bad, period. And I'm hardly a typesetting snob either, but this person can't even be bothered to stay inside the speech bubbles...