The only issue with this (besides their chins) is the fact she loves him even though he is literally killing her people and she is "mostly" fine with it to the extent of even "falling in love" while/during his acts of violence. Plus the fact he is so attached to her without a real solid reason...
Whenever I see these low quality translations, I always wonder why they don't put it thru grammarly or similar sites. Like if it's a "passion" project actually put some minimum effort like that. It just bothers me because the meaning of what they're saying is lost so it's like they're "putting...