1. the tension in this story is getting kind of wack
2. The villains are like super obvious
3. Who the heck was the old lady in the end and why does she matter
@Karmichel Yea that's probably the healthiest option for the young gal but I still would like to see the scene where she rightfully chews out that crappy mom for her awfulness
story hard to follow, anatomy bad, and he rapes her and this is supposed to be a happy ending? author was super off the mark on both story enjoyablity and whatever sensuality could be found from this soggy cracker couple