....No MC THIS early? Bad. The focus being on TOTALLY NEW characters we've never seen, much less heard of, in a conflict we couldn't possibly care about? Much, much worse.
WOW! I read flame scans first and....this one was MUCH better. Things I was confused on in their version were made clear in this one. Really great job!
The best part is....the more encounters he has with the group like this....the more legitimate his title as "Earth Guardian" becomes. Doesn't matter how it started, if everyone recognizes him as official....he is. I LOVE it!
The pacing of this chapter was deeply unfortunate. Seeing more of the former parties politics is fine. I think its...kinda EARLY but whatever. Having that toxic loli be the mouthpiece of said story? I hate that decision. She's unpleasant. I'm hoping the mc gets focus in the coming chapters...
The mage gets SO MUCH FOCUS, that she feels the main fucking character! We almost EXCLUSIVELY hear things from her perspective because she is so busy being jealous and needlessly gaslighting her "friends". Its....its REAL bad.
This....THIS is why you KILL YOUR DARLINGS. That one character or idea an author is attached to or proud of that just. doesn't. quite. fit. And what do the bad authors do? They jam said idea/character in there anyway, consequences be damned. The LAST time I lost interest in this series....was...
See....this is just unpleasant to read. There is a way to write villains as evil but...these people are deplorable; repellent even. As others have said, if this isn't resolved, QUICKLY, im dropping this.
Marino is TRULY a trash character. Every time she's on the page, I want to scroll. SUCH a bad idea introducing a character THIS BLAND so deep into the series.