From the way they showed the flashback on page 18, I think it's supposed to be the assassin's thoughts up to the point where Misora has thought bubbles. (Just came back to say that because it was bugging me.) No wait, no. Just up until the large panel gap where it switches to Misora's thoughts...
Dammit. I'll fix it a bit later. Redrawing hentai takes priority.
Edit: Done. Any errors that are in Unknown III's version, I won't be fixing. (For the sake of fixing them in the 4th, later version of ch.1, lol.)
@Umbrecola Yes.
Edit: I agree with the other readers that said this was a lazy work. Nothing particularly memorable happened in the original story, and nothing new's going to happen here. The original was boring enough as it was. Now this is just insulting to read.
I'm so sick of the "Hazama = bad guy" cliché. Can this guy please be a good guy and is just thinking about the magical education of the only girl who can use light magic in the school?
(And don't you fucking dare ping me with a spoiler comment just because you want someone to talk to about the...