I think the typesetting is very good, but the translation is not very smooth. It isn't terrible but the meaning of sentences isn't very clear- maybe the original is also vague.
Sad I had to drop this after reading all that was here. Maybe I can find it hosted on a site where the pages are in proper order but the scanlator site listed in discussion isn't one of them.
I remember the guy being arrogant and rude but I don't remember him doing anything worth wanting to have him killed. This is a one piece level flashback tho